“Pescaria no Parque das Timbaúbas” Juazeiro do Norte, Brazil. CC3.0 photo by MacioFeitosa
For this weeks Flash! Friday we had 200 words to tell a story about the prompt above. We had to include a mischief maker.
Gone Fishin
There is an invisible line, under the hastily built lake in our town. On one side of the lake, the houses are large, and well maintained. We know, because we are the ones that maintain them. My brother spends all day pruning someone else’s hedges, and we don’t even have a garden. Our house is a tiny basement apartment. The only thing growing in it is despair. And mold.
We see the line, but so do the rich folks. The difference is, they are looking down. They don’t have the sun in their eyes, blinding them, making it hard to move. They think they see us clearly. To them we are lazy and stupid.
Works for me.
I bring three of the boys with me to ‘fish’.
The rich folks laugh at us. Stupid locals. Don’t they know the lake is empty.
We laugh too. We aren’t looking to eat for one night. We are the lookouts, our job is to spot the servants with the suitcases, to know who is heading back to their third home. Those are the big fish, the lunkers. When we see that, we know we will eat well for a month.
Can you start doing short stories again? Those are great.
Thanks Grant, really glad you enjoyed them. I just started up writing Flash Fiction again a couple of weeks ago, which took a long break as the weekly comp I enter had a hiatus. Feels great to be back into the swing of things.
I’d absolutely love to write a few short stories too as I really like that format. It’s a great way to test out story ideas. A couple of my books started out as short stories and just kind of grew from there.
Also, will there be a third in the One Up series?
There sure will. It’s been in the works for a while, hoping to get it out this year. It features the characters from Level Up, and has a fantasy setting. It’s called Power Up 🙂
When will it be released?